Epic fail

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Epic fail

Postby Tommy Smith » 25 Jan 2015, 11:25

' It was a bright cold day, and the clock was striking. Thirteen Spitfires stood silently around the airfield, dim and dripping shapes in the heavy fog that blanketed the ground..'

The rest of the plot is in there but not coming into land quite yet despite trying to flag it down :)
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Re: Epic fail

Postby Tracer » 25 Jan 2015, 11:39

Nice angle, though!
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Re: Epic fail

Postby Fairblue » 25 Jan 2015, 11:44

:lol: :thumbup:
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Re: Epic fail

Postby kylie_koyote » 25 Jan 2015, 13:06

It's a lovely start. Perhaps the rest will come in time.
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Re: Epic fail

Postby OzBiggles1963 » 25 Jan 2015, 14:37

Tracer wrote:Nice angle, though!


Absolutely ingenious use of the full stop old boy! :yay:
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Re: Epic fail

Postby SaintedAunt » 25 Jan 2015, 15:04

OzBiggles1963 wrote:
Tracer wrote:Nice angle, though!


Absolutely ingenious use of the full stop old boy! :yay:

Very nice. Ingenious use of the full stop indeed ;)
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Re: Epic fail

Postby Frederique » 25 Jan 2015, 16:52

Hey, I would read that story! It sounds like the start of a wonderful Bigglesien adventure. :mrgreen:

Tommy Smith wrote: It was a bright cold day, and the clock was striking. Thirteen Spitfires...
Clever. :jollygood:
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Re: Epic fail

Postby Kismet » 25 Jan 2015, 19:35

Tommy Smith wrote:' It was a bright cold day, and the clock was striking. Thirteen Spitfires stood silently around the airfield, dim and dripping shapes in the heavy fog that blanketed the ground..'

The rest of the plot is in there but not coming into land quite yet despite trying to flag it down :)



Very good. Nice punctuation. :lol:
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Re: Epic fail

Postby RAAF Spitfire Girl » 25 Jan 2015, 22:20

Repeats all of the above. Great lateral thinking there TS :thumbup: And, like the others, I'd like to read the rest when it sorts itself out.
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Re: Epic fail

Postby tiffinata » 25 Jan 2015, 23:11

What everyone said!
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Re: Epic fail

Postby Spitfire666 » 26 Jan 2015, 09:08

Tommy Smith wrote:' It was a bright cold day, and the clock was striking. Thirteen Spitfires stood silently around the airfield, dim and dripping shapes in the heavy fog that blanketed the ground..'

The rest of the plot is in there but not coming into land quite yet despite trying to flag it down :)

This sounds like a good story when you catch hold of it. 8-)
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Re: Epic fail

Postby J349 » 26 Jan 2015, 10:07

Agree. Great start!
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